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Wonderland

Look at the girl on the plastic green case
marble and lean she carries her face,
vision in dazzling blue and bleach white,
outlandish figure in colors too bright,
erasing the lines of smoky shades,
she draws the focus with livid blades,
readhead Alice in an urban Wonderland,
supporting her chin with a weary hand.

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Poem done with the help of
http://trixypixie.deviantart.com/art/and-we-ll-be-dreaming-79414737

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    This really draws in some vibrant imagery and then
    with the last line, a certain feeling...
    I felt disillusion here even though she has painted
    herself in shades of manmade beauty. She has never
    admitted to the dull colours that live within. Blue