the stairway to Styx
melted under lost libations
of fragrent flames;
Phlegethon's curse.
Author notes
Used the picture prompt.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie from Stefanie :) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 10, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great use of vocabulary and imagery, made me know the option you chose before even reading the authors notes box. Very vibrant, dark and yet beautiful.
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i think you blew us all away with your words amazing
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wow
completely fits the picture. This is really good. I enjoyed this. Wow -
Let me tell you, girl...I have never seen anyone other than Laura beable to come up with such words and deep twisted metaphor for a prompt so quickly...sometimes I am just in awe...amazing job...
Best to you!
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Excellent word choice good luck with this in the contest Dear
Redwing SPirit
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This is amazing. Especially the first few lines. I love this. And DEFFINATELY fits the picture. When I first saw it I thought of hell too lol.
Megan
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