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Torment

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the stairway to Styx
melted under lost libations
of fragrent flames;
Phlegethon's curse.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    March 10

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    Great use of vocabulary and imagery, made me know the option you chose before even reading the authors notes box. Very vibrant, dark and yet beautiful.

  • doyouloveit
    March 10
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    i think you blew us all away with your words amazing


  • APoeticDreamer
    March 10
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    wow

    completely fits the picture. This is really good. I enjoyed this. Wow

  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 10

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    Let me tell you, girl...I have never seen anyone other than Laura beable to come up with such words and deep twisted metaphor for a prompt so quickly...sometimes I am just in awe...amazing job...
    Best to you!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10

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    Excellent word choice good luck with this in the contest Dear Redwing SPirit


  • Mommas Fallen Angel
    March 10

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    This is amazing. Especially the first few lines. I love this. And DEFFINATELY fits the picture. When I first saw it I thought of hell too lol.
    Megan
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