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Hope

When it is cloudy and grey
the sun will shine, again
if we are having a bad day
there is hope what we face.

When we feel lost hope
we can't feel the relieve
and so we can't cope
what we are facing in life.

There is hope if we believe
there will be hope in our pain,
we begin to feel some relieve,
and our pain will be ease.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    HOPE, FAITH AND LOVE. THE MOST POWERFUL WORDS IN HISTORY AND YOU HAVE BROUGHT THEM TOGETHER IN A LOVELY CREATIVE WAY. GOD BLESS


  • ButterflyforChrist
    March 10, 2008
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    Beautiful and so true. This wonderful sweetie. Great job.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10, 2008
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    Very nice.


  • Cynthia
    March 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    I am very happy you lead me to the write.

    Everyone has to remember that there is "HOPE," only if they are willing to give it some time.
    Well done.
    Keep up with the great work.
    Keep on penning.
    Thank you for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
    *S* Cynthia

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