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[ Confined with fear ]

Confined with fear
Nightmare mocks
She snivels
He devours pleasure

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  • Melissa Burns
    March 11, 2008

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    Short and punchy! I loved it, congrats on the win here. You have such a way with words I'm sure you have a shelf just lined with shinny stuff


  • Tattboyspet
    March 11, 2008

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    enjoyed this one thoroughly - short and basically exactly what I saw too!
    thank you for your entry


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    hehe this on is good too. hope you do well with it Good luck in the contest