Dear Diary
todays a good day
yes so far
i dare not say
might just jinx
break the links
between me and reality
have ta hold me down
hold the crown
i am queen
can't be seen
saturated in sorrow
not good for my rep...
yes the one i don't have
Shhhhhh
they don't know
not at all
that i can fall
and hit
solid rock
gun cocked
but blocked
can't shoot myself
loot myself
until i'm broke
yes, even broker
does, does
does this make sense?
it does ta me
in an odd way
purple pea green pod way
"tis unnatural"
ya know what i mean?
probably not
cracking up...
cause i knew before i asked you
no one does
its all in me
so hard to see
How crowded ones mind can be
one too many thoughts to thinnk
my insides stink..
of flesh
duh
yes, still laughing
where is this coming from?
randomness
all of this
whoops
i spilled my vial...
poison, poison all over
in the trees
the TVs
yes, pollution and porn
bet you weren't expecting that huh?
both the same
shares publicity and fame
corrupting the community
yet
brings us together
corrects damaged unity
making..us..better?
here
let me stop
Yes, i'm stopping
free verse gone wrong
gone on too long
yes, so sad
to bring to an end
such a wacky write
but thats alright
anyhow see ya later
i must go...
what i'll write next time?
nobody knows...
A contest entry
- Be Original, more points to come by katie-jo.
700 points, ended March 15, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes. by still.she.waits.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hahaha...this cracked me up....good job.
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this is very original, so good luck in the contest! i'm sure you'll do great. i dont think it gets more original than that. it is random, but i think that's just a part of it that makes it all the better.
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yr rhymes is off the hook , however i would suggest to you to write yr stuff out and make sure it flows , like one topic into the other... sometimes i feel like there should have been a cough and you only put a hiccup... other than that .. its fly... you go girl!!!!
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Well its a free verse, just random thoughts that came flying out of my head, meant to be wacky ya know? wasn't planned.
Hence the ------> "where is this coming from?
randomness
all of this" part
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The rhythym in this one is GREAT!
I really like this
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