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Free as a Bird [With a Broken Wing]

they tossed
their feathered intentions
into the sky.

as sleeping beauty sat,
ugly in his rage;
[melted to the ground
that tried to free
with clay stayed hands.]

she sat on the seashore,
throwing dirt,

only to watch it fall again.
[wishing it would soar
on its own.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • And Hyetal
    September 8, 2008

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    'she sat on the seashore,
    throwing dirt,'

    You know what I'm going to say, but immuna say it anyways.

    WOW GREAT IMAGERY WOW GREAT LAST TWO LINES

    I loves.

    ~Cassie


  • MysticalRayne
    March 10, 2008
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    Beautiful job - Love where you took this - best of luck hun


  • Ryno
    March 10, 2008

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    Pretty beginning and tragic ending. Like... like... bad memories and regrets we try to get rid of but they wont leave us no matter what we do trying to get rid of them and the good things leave and don't stay!!

    Grr. Thanks for the entry.

    Ryan