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Invisable

Trapped inside a box of lies

Here is where my conscience died

Sewing stiched the broken seems

Hear the voice I'll never speak

Walking atop the jagged glass

Of the memories that have come to pass

Born in a world of sorrow and anxiety

Ignorant and blind of the truth I can not see

Frustration and fatiuge are two things I never need

Hand and hand with the pain of diversity

Listen to the song of a poor commoner's plee

This is what happened when the world forgot about me

I will ask you one last time

Am I invisable or was I just left behind

Please tell me what you think

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  • SecretMe15
    March 10, 2008

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    Okay. This definitely reminded me of a poem i've once written. I liked it. It could've been worded much stronger but the meaning that it holds really connects to how I feel at times.