Sing a song to society,
About the meaning of sobriety,
When you finally relapse,
It's something hard to grasp,
You've failed again another time,
And all you have is this little ryme,
Love's ceased to come your way,
Leaving you singing 'come back another day',
The marijuana sure tastes good,
But trust me G, we're not in the hood,
To hop over fences,
And kill our defences,
Just to get a taste,
Of what we think isn't a waste,
So sing your song to society,
About the meaning of sobriety,
This is the meaning of strife,
When we're finally living the good life...
A contest entry
- Give me Everything you've Got by CrystalJet.
600 points, ended March 14, 2008, 318 entries
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Comments
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you should trying writing without rhyming, i think you'd be good at it
as for the poem, i think the rhyming is a little forced. but it's good...it's really good, courtney.....
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fuckn bitchn
omg i fuckn love it....you are amazing....really...


