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The Good Life???

Sing a song to society,
About the meaning of sobriety,

When you finally relapse,
It's something hard to grasp,

You've failed again another time,
And all you have is this little ryme,

Love's ceased to come your way,
Leaving you singing 'come back another day',

The marijuana sure tastes good,
But trust me G, we're not in the hood,

To hop over fences,
And kill our defences,

Just to get a taste,
Of what we think isn't a waste,

So sing your song to society,
About the meaning of sobriety,

This is the meaning of strife,
When we're finally living the good life...

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  • Dirty and Broken
    March 10, 2008

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    you should trying writing without rhyming, i think you'd be good at it
    as for the poem, i think the rhyming is a little forced. but it's good...it's really good, courtney.....


  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    March 10, 2008
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    fuckn bitchn

    omg i fuckn love it....you are amazing....really...