It's pointless,
Absolutely unwinnable,
Worthless, just a quest for sex.
There is just no reason,
Kindness is wrong,
Less humans is a good cause,
Altruism is just stupid,
Because forever, agression won,
Tell me this,
I'll listen,
I'll listen,
With ends bliss,
Rend Moses' tablet,
Let's establish,
Our order, mix the mortar,
Lay the bricks,
Over morality's boulder.
Till older.
Then age sets in,
We have nothing within,
It's Life.
Author notes
quote prompt: "As far as you're concerned the next breath that you take should be underwater.
You're worthless. You've been told once before.
This time you're gonna get back a little more than you paid for." The Academy is... In Our Defense
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hmm...simple, yet, exactly what i was looking for. you've done an amazing job here. you've shown us the world in an extremely poetic way. reading this poem, it was like being brought back into reality. look around you friend. you see beauty, love, and the problems of celebrities. when, here in reality, people die every day of various causes. so much pain and suffering for NO reason. what can we do? we can take a stand for what we believe in whenever we see the chance. now is our time! thanks again. best of luck and good write.
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o we;lll thank u
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I felt like I was rapping while reading this.. ::giggles::
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iss that a good thing?
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yes that means it had a followable rhythm!
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