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.:Uh-Huh A Lovely Melloday:.

drowned in
        dow
            n
              (p)ers
when the u^
don't lift me high enough

  under the doctors name
when the pencil's lead

  certifies that youre dead

  when the beeping noise

holds its pause

  it remains: your heart has its flaws

  A disease?...no..

  but call it that,

 

  yeah why not

 

when your sleeve, too big, touches

 your wrist, too small,

and your yellow raw teeth crunches

  the water is your goddess

  and then you wake up sweating

from starving sleeps where youre over heating

  you swallow your weeping,

  and throw up your water

   only [harderandharder]

becoming soaked in bile like a kid with diarrhea

 and theres

no escaping the fate youve surrounded yourself with

  trying to lean in for a kiss,

but swing after swing--you apparently miss

breath smells like

 vomit..anyhow

 bruised, hit after hit

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008, Angie Romans. All rights reserved.
No republication of this material, in any form or medium, is permitted without express permission of the author.

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again..not finished.

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  • I will stand by you
    April 10, 2008

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    not finished? It seems like a good write. If its not finished I would love to see where it takes you or you take it. Keep up the great work.