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Elusive Inspiration

 

 

Travelling on the fringes of a promised whisper,
cherished,  exhaled breath fused with last rays of longings spore,
each tender moment explored, consumed, experienced,
gradually each token mingles; becoming plenary.
hauntingly, sonorous, panache vibrations echo across a lambent evening sky .


.... from such comes my elusive inspiration.

 

 

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  • NeonRose
    April 23, 2008
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    Beautifully written, wonderful use of language. I enjoyed this very much!


  • Hoosierpoet silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    exhilerating

    Excellent use of words in describing an exhilerating moment - did I spell that right? Anyway, it is good to read your work again. I haven't been active on this site for quite some time, but am starting to write more again.

    Moses