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It's still life? or a still life

When words are not enough for you're sadness...it's still life
when you feel nothing brings you up...it's still life
when you feel you had enough...it's still life
when life brings it on to rough..it's still life

But know the difference between it just still being life and a still life.
because when the latter is only done, when you're defeated by strife

so when you refused to fight back...you have a still life
when you're ignorance overcomes you're intelligence..you have a still life
when you refused to try again, you had enough?..you have a still life
when you're moments of hapiness, don't really add up...you have as till life

so move the painting of you're life, repair it's broken frame
because doing this will results, in life moving again
Transfer the picture of your life, to a screenplay
Move you're sorrow, and chase the dark away

Recolour the photo of you're dreams, get it moving
Because by sepia toning, what you want, you're only losing
So enhance the quality of the picture of your mind, by adding tone
create the image you need to see, create it you're own

So don't restrict you're self to be a painting, but just keep on giving.
don't have a still life....just keep on living

Author notes

option 3 i used 'still life'
I have no idea lol why i wrote this. but this came to my head as soon as i saw 'still life' hope it's okey
if you don't liek tel me plox =D
thankls!

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  • SaveMeFromDarkness
    June 9, 2008

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    Very Neat Write

    This poem is really....phenomenal. It really makes you think how you've been living. Thanks for sharing!