Penman took Desire to a puppet show
hoping to relieve the symptoms of her flu.
Music so loud, marrionette's stiff
as penman looked at him with lifted eyebrow.
Clearly he saw they were aliens in disguise,
whispering to Desire of his thoughts about this.
She responded that he was holding too many collab contests
with a certain other AP member and was being influenced by same.
Desire scoffed that next thing he would say
would be these imagination's alien's
were wearing banana skin underwear and eating fried bolts,
or that said alien's were dancing in secret code while getting wedgies from ill fitting clothes!
Penman turned to Desire with mouth agog and that sparkle in his eyes,
that she had seen exactly what was going on, just like he had;
they were here to make the world their own, while dancing on their heads,
eating fish paste sandwiches with creamy cheesecake!
He knew then, without doubt, he had found the perfect AP wife!
In a list
A contest entry
- LET'S GIVE A SMILE to AP's, Desire by penman.
525 points, ended March 22, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL this is so funny I couldn' stop laughing, alien is wearing banana skin under wear, LOL and eating fried bolts. WONDERFUL.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Truth About The Alien Marrionette's
Oh My Gosh
When I read the title...I was thinking to myself~
Self...be prepared for something out of this world to possess You with laughter
Yep Yep
These lines had me rolling on the floor~~
She responded that he was holding too many collab contests
with a certain other AP member and was being influenced by same.
Desire scoffed that next thing he would say
would be these imagination's alien's
were wearing banana skin underwear and eating fried bolts,
or that said alien's were dancing in secret code while getting wedgies from ill fitting clothes!
Holy Moly
Penman turned to Desire with mouth agog and that sparkle in his eyes,
that she had seen exactly what was going on, just like he had.
Oooooooooooooh
He would say also:
The dementia kicked in
I Appreciate the time You took to bring forth
a HUGE smile to my face
Thank You for sharing Your Humor also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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awwwwwwww this is a gorgous write gran and it made me smile and chuckle as I read it. the tale is amazing hehe and cleverly written. wel done gran
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