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Wilting Roses

Time wasted wondering
loves me
or not
leaves only
soiled paths
crimson trails
empty vases

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    So detailed and descriptive... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.


  • autumns rising
    March 10, 2008

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    awwww this is gorgeous. I prefer shorter poetry, it holds so much more than the really long ones. Great job and good luck girl!