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Morning Kisses

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Morning Kisses



Hey Mom, don’t shed a tear now
you know that I’m ok,
you’re forever in my heart
and I watch you every day.

I know that you can’t see me
or hear me whisper low,
I guess that you feel something
what it is you may not know.

The things we did together
I guess I’ll always miss,
but I wake you in the morning
with a tender little kiss.

I sit and watch the others
as they grow and make you glad,
this poem comes with love from me
to you and to my Dad.

My birthday’s fast approaching
but please don’t shed a tear,
‘cos I’ll be right inside you
as we start another year.

 
 
 
 

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  • Accidentally Poetic
    March 13, 2008

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    This is an amazing heartfelt piece. Wonderful job. Best of luck in the contest.

    Crystal


  • arafura gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    There have been some very good entries in this including this sad but relevant poem. TexasMomma will be touched! Good luck in the contest!


  • Legend silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    There is always something special about sad poetry that grabs me Whether it be real or imaginary. The Victorian poets were good at it This is a beautiful loving piece Those us who have lost a loved one will take comfort from these words.We know that those we love are always with us though not always in obvious ways
    Good luck in the contest


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 10, 2008

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    That was beautiful. Amazing rhyme and flow to this superb piece. Wonderful stuff.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • Pearl-1
    March 10, 2008
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    so beautifully written..i wish i had a mum i could say those words to..good luck sue


  • TexasMomma
    March 10, 2008

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    very beautiful and heart felt piece...thank you so much for penning this for me and I wish you the best of luck in my contest!
    God bless you from the bottom of my heart, Ellan

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