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~Your Desire~



Am I the object of desire,
the fuel to ignite her hidden fire,

laying deep inside her hoary heart,
like morning embers awaiting a spark.

Will each kiss stoke the coals
to heat the furnace, to meld our souls,

while we lie our skins ingrained
where finger touches, love is stained

and each caress along nirvanas road,
leads to satisfaction of sighs bestowed.

Within the core of twisted sheets
burns our sun as bodies meet,

two to one like chimera mixed,
our hypnotic breath remains transfixed

upon the lips of whispered bliss,
while aurora spirals down heavens abyss

and when love is done, earth is still,
will my promises still fulfil

the empty space by your side
or will you leave our love denied?

So I ask, “is this what you require,
just an object for your desire”?


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Prompt : Mirrored Emotions - http://allpoetry.com/poem/2079287 - By Looneyeclipse - http://allpoetry.com/looneyeclipse

Written in rhyming couplets

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  • poet2angels gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    I really love this piece...
    I think that you were truly inspired by the style and beauty of the featured piece to create your own unique and beautiful poetry that sings of a sweet romance of it's own

    Excellent!

    Lynda


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    oh uncle you have been beautifully inspired and the way it flows across the page is amazing and clever.I love this