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A gift to mom

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A gift to mom
a precious boy
to hold on to
and bring you joy
For every one
is a gift of love
lent to us
from up above
Sometimes they come
and stay a while
and walk though many
a weary mile
Sometimes it seems
a very short day
God calls then home
they're taken away
For life is a mist
it shall not last
before you're ready
it has flown past
So cherish this day
'til setting sun
for God's not promised
another one
If you have a child
then hug them tight
their time may pass
before comes night

Author notes

For my friend Ellan on the anniversary of the death of her beloved son

A contest entry

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  • Accidentally Poetic
    March 13, 2008
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    WOW! This write was just amazing. I truly loved it.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    Crystal


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    What a wonderful friend she has in you. This is touching as well as inspiring! A delightful read with a great message!

    Hugz~

    Frogz


  • wildfiredreamer
    March 10, 2008

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    Mark this is lovely, I believe your words will be a blessing to your friend.

    Rhonda


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    oh this is so beautifully written your wordds are so strong and beautifully penned with love and care. you truly are an amazing man


  • TexasMomma
    March 10, 2008

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    Very beautiful piece, I love the way you worded it and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for penning this for me and Bubba! I wish you luck in my contest!
    God bless you from the bottom of my heart, Ellan

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