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Muted Mannequin




Faith's yarn rolling back;
As frills whisper invites,
melancholy droop in turquoise eyes
betray her inherent loneliness.





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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    February 4
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    There is something deep and intriguing about this poem, its very good indeed
    thanks for sharing


  • The Kake Show
    March 10, 2008

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    interesting

    this is really good i had to read it twice... you took a darker side on the picture and i love it the picture alwayss says hope and mother natureish too me and you went the oppisite good job