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  • Billythekid
    March 18, 2008

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    This is a very endearing Haiku.I truly love how much has been said in these 11 words. FANTASTIC, thanks for entering.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    this is amazng and i loved the gentle touch of it that creates an image in my mind aswell. well done and best of luck