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Some Words Of Friendship

Through ruthless distances of Time,
I seek for a soft soul, an Individual,
Who pats this empty soul of mine.

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For Ian *Smiles*

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 12

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    Kind of cute ditty me thinks,..hmm, and the connection is guess who..his contest and a poem to him..Cleverly penned.....look not too far, as many would like to pat your sweet soul, Massy! write,dear..a.


    • Vernal Bloom
      September 12
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      I enjoye being patted by you!
      I was in school days when I wrote this, I just thought of him and some verses flew and here is the result. Thankee for kind words here


  • individuality gold member
    September 2

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  • i know

  • *ian*

    i am here with your spirit


    whenever you are near me or i need you


  • Alyzeh
    September 26, 2008
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    We all do..we all do!

    Good work!


  • individuality gold member
    July 17, 2008
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  • Galaxy2
    May 15, 2008
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    Wish you everything best, honey!

    Galaxy2


  • individuality gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    a happy belated birthday to you for the day before yesterday


  • individuality gold member
    March 24, 2008
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  • individuality gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    thank you, it is a nice smile to get this morning it is always good to receive kind words in poetry

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