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The Creator

Let me be
Dangerously
Closer to
In Control
Let me Breathe
Apprehensively
Getting to
In Control

This is what you say
It's written here
In the brackets of my mind
How can you disobey?

This is how you feel
I felt it too
In the bottom of my heart
How can it not be real?

This is what you'll do
In these situations
Keep calm
I won't let the pain
Find you.

This is the nines
The rogues
The prodigies
This is the way I take hold

I am the stars
The moons
The creator
These worlds are mine
For the taking

This is what I promise
I can't make you
everything I am
But we can pretend

This is what's acceptable
If you're willing
But don't argue
For I am still in charge

This is where I stand
You can join me
Don't get too attached
It will be gone by morning

Let me be
Dangerously
Closer to
In Control
Let me Breathe
Apprehensively
Getting to
In Control

Author notes

After seeing 'The Nines' and 'Slipstream', which are both similar in context, There have been idea's bouncing around in my head constantly. This is related (loosely) to one of them.

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  • wordsmistress21
    March 11, 2008
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    This is the nines
    The rogues
    The prodigies
    This is the way I take hold

    ...fine verse