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Etched

Your face is etched
into my mind,
my heart melts
I  l
    o
      v
        e
you so much.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.9/2008

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  • ckwriter69
    March 18, 2008

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    I like the form you have used here, very well done. very sweet and with a little amount of words. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    My only suggestion is to maybe leave more space between the I and the L in love, but other than that, it's beautiful...not only your words, but the idea, that one can love that deeply.


  • captain howdy
    March 10, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt! Very nice!


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    March 9, 2008

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    lovely take on prompt,
    thank you

    Tasha