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The Hours

The tempo slows,
in the hush of night,
like old friends
bring comfort.
close the blinds.
wrap the blankets.
Be.

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2 AM

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  • Chainsaw
    March 15, 2008

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    I love this. It's such a universally familliar feeling,something any reader can relate to. And you put it so well. Brilliant.


  • sheltered gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Just be... Love that.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Nice flow...love the creative and wonderful thought inn your words...it is a very comforting write...
    thank you so much, for entering!