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Bow

Feel my power
See my strength
Take note of all that I control
All that I am is before you
What do you see?
Some see a leader
Others, a monster
Still others see nothing at all
My eyes have been ignited with fire
Fueled by the flame of my soul
A mind sharp and keen
Yet black, cold, and ruthless
No heart to speak of
I lack remorse
I control without feeling
I destroy without caring
Decide for yourself what you see
But for now I command my pawns

BOW!!!

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  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    April 9, 2008

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    Lol. This is pretty good =] I like who you starte the beginging. But I think in the third line where it says "Take note of all the I control" The the should be that. And I love how you tell how you see yourself. And then you tell the person to decide what the see. Nice Job!
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