All quiet
Except the scratching,
Of my pen
On paper.
Writing a 2am letter
To my heart.
Author notes
i dont usually write short poems like this. so it's kinda odd..
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A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired 20 words or less 10 entries by mysticstorm.
550 points, ended March 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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now this i really love, its got an amazing impact! you deff deserved gold for this, and what's so great is how much you said with such few words, its a wonderful thing to posses. take care!
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I have been there and this is very very good thank you for entering
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i really really like this.
sry random observation: dont call me baby by kreesha turner sounds like a song from mama mia :|
anyways back to your poem,
i agree with sheltered, you can sense the silence behind this. -
You can almost sence the silence here.
Great image.
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Very beautiful and thought provoking...for someone who does not do this kind of writes, you did a wonderful job...this is very deep and touching...I love where you went with this write...
thank you for entering!
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