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What Do You See

What do you see
When you look into my eyes
Do you see the reflection of me

Does that reflection bring you a smile
Does it make you want to linger a while

Do you see me
Or do you only see what you want to see

I know what the soul of those eyes hold
They can be warm or they can me cold

Sometime I wonder what you may see
When you look into the eyes
That belong to me

Author notes

Just some thoughts I had after I read a friends poem. At times I wonder what others truly see..I know personally I love eyes and what I see within them. I guess maybe it is like they say the eyes are a reflection of the soul.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 1, 2008
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    Well dear friend, I see with my spirit, another spirit that is so filled with love and compassion for others. A heart that understands and accepts unconditionally. A sweet and nurturing soul, that reaches well beyond the confinements of time and space. I see a pure and ethereal beauty , I see you 


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    A lovely poem my friend. Yes the eyes are the windows to the soul. There must be much love and caring behind your eyes dear friend. Thank you for always stopping by for a visit. Bless you. Sandy


  • gullionmar
    March 10, 2008

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    very nice

    well written and true tey say te eyes are the window to the soul ,and that being the case you have a beautiful soul love you sis


  • dustookie2
    March 9, 2008
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    I guess we only will ever see what we want to see and that is not a bad thing to keep some of who you are to yourself and share is only with one who holds your heart. Great flow hun like where your words took my thoughts. Those who know you know what you hold in your soul and that will be reflected in the smile of your eyes.