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Chow Mien

Should have some how
let me in
such a dirty, dirty
    dirty sin
we have done
to me,
to you
to everyone

I'll kiss you sweetly,
so discretely
it's you completely
who makes me feel the way I do
I want to give it all to you

Today should have,
could have
would have been
      The day
instead I cried,
denied
and I left my pride

I washed it down
with chow mien rice
  emotions raging
like child head lice

I slit my wrists because of you
  and bandage them back up
you make me want to drink,
    Baby
from a sippie cup

Author notes

i've used the line "to me, to you, to everyone" before in a different poem. but whatev. who doesn't reuse lines? besides, this poem's a lot different... so yeah. just a FYI. Hate me.

hit it.

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