Sand between my toes, sea salt in my hair
This is where I go, to get away from it all.
Looks out at the horizon, so detached from the rest of the world
No more suffering, only happiness
That’s why my dream place is here
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quicky by Samcat.
500 points, ended March 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aw this is very beautiful, i love that the reader can close his or her eyes, and just relax at this calm place and feel the breeze, and smell the ocean...i love te ocean! wonderful write
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"Sand between my toes, sea salt in my hair"
Simple, visual
This is one of your earlier ones, yeah?
I like it, but I love your December ones better
Shelly
xxx
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yaa. one of the earliest actually
this was like the second contest i ever entered lol
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It's a wonderful write though unfortunately it's too short. But it does bring back memories of places like the one you describe. Great places to just be happy.
Thank you for entering my contest. -
"Sand between my toes, sea salt in my hair
This is where I go, to get away from it all."
- sounds great to me!
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again with the ocean!
apparently its not only me who has the obsession.
its pretty though
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haha i think the prompt in the contest involved a picture of an ocean lol
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i really like this poem, it offers so much more than words and shows an inner depth of feelings.
good luck.
x
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