Ghostly visions haunt me
Day after day
Not feeling.
Wandering through the world
Alone and free
Not waking.
Fear soon seeps through my skin .
Slowly, softly
Not breaking.
Pensiveness soon takes me
Into my dreams,
Not trembling.
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this feels like one of thos voids full of emotions of emptiness, and numb feelings. i like the last two stanzas the most. but all of it together is good, it all sets a mood for the reader. great poem!
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Wow. That's a fantastic write. Such depth. My favourite part, most definitely, was;
Fear soon seeps through my skin .
Slowly, softly
Not breaking. -
"Ghostly visions haunt me
Day after day
Not feeling."
Wow.
Powerful opening.
And I'm gonna get this gold
Shelly
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Slowly, softly
Not breaking
Pensiveness soon takes me
Into my dreams
Not trembling
so so beautiful.
your writing reminds me of like .. spirally swirly rainbows :|
i have no clue why
and no im not high
but yea.. i love it. -
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oops my bad
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thanks! this is good! it's deep, and full of meaning. thank you so much for entering and good luck!
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