Soft zephyrs breeze over the trees;
entwined spirits turn carnal in time.
In worship knees touching knees,
ecstasy melts with passion divine.
Lustful hunger silent tongues play;
love inhales my aroma sensational.
Nights sing away clouds of gray,
emotions blooming unconditional.
Steel hardness taste of my cream;
stroking the fires upon each breast.
Licking, lapping a oral silken dream
waves of ardency like a ocean crest.
Salacious nibbles of scarlet essence;
united by ruby liquid my love savors.
Handsome man climaxing so intense
succulent delight of honey flavors.
Locked together among pillows of red
eyes smiling searching wanting more.
Your position ties me to the bed;
my favorite upside-down on the floor.
Fragrance of lavender, soft strong
mixed with essence of our pleasure.
Ways of the Kamasutra are never wrong
teaching us passion without measure.
Author notes
prompt: KAMA SUTRA
A contest entry
- kamasutra by Godless But Divine.
650 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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As soon as I wipe the drool of my face, I'll sing the praises of your poem (LOL). Lovely imagery - seductively erotic and totally great!
Congratulations!
Ken
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HEAT
Drumming beats, from the heart came neat,
Touches lit the heat, flesh to flesh did greet
Lit with touch burning heat, prepering virgins to bleed
After the vagina embraced the treat, the phallus vastly spread its seeds.
FANTASTIC fantacy..Orgasm of the mind..Best luck.
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Those Carnal Nights filled with pillows of red
Craving for lustful attention from each other
Many positions tried in the floor and bed
Knowing fulfillment to be true by lovers
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Hope you like the little poem inspired by your own write of graceful erotica. Good luck in the contest.
Ted E
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"Lustful hunger silent tongues play;"...love that line! This was sooo sexy and sensual. It was like I can hear it being spoken in a soft tone. Wonderful job! Keep Writing!
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Beautiful take on the prompt.
Loved the flow to this, so smooth
brought wonderful images to my mind
a delight to read.
Love ~sugar~
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That was brilliant writing right there. Fantastic imagery that this brought to the mind. Indeed, it did bring to mind the 'Karma Sutra.' The depth and beauty of this is stunning. Well done my friend.
Love
Wayne Leon
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Wow
You did an AMAZING job, there are no words to describe my thoughts. As I was reading a smile caught my lips and stayed the entire way through...my goodness!!!!
Best of luck in the contest!
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Nice story, nice concept. Your metaphor draws the reader into the picture, 'causing us to not only to viseulize, but to actuall feel what is happening.
Well done, poet.
Love,
Brazos
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OOoh the
Karma Sutra
I think you did very well as expected here Godmother 
Good luck and keep writing.
Lady
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