Until your return
every raindrop that falls
will linger
in silent devotion
of eternity
we will share;
each, a miracle.
Author notes
Prompt: picture credit http://tigaer.deviantart.com/art/Captured-Beauty-XXXV-79471559
20 words exactly
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie - Reserve a Spot by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended March 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful! short and simple and perfetc! Thank you very much for letting me read this! You are a wonderful poet!
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Thank you for your beautiful comment and for reading this
I appreciate it.
Gaylene
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Very deserving of the gold. Says so much in so few words. Quite a challenge also to fit it to an exact number of words. Well done.
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a good poem, ah soft and loving, time slips a tear through eternity's ring and sighs, well deserving of the gold.
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Wow this is so beautiful, and you will wait for your love. this is awsome that you won gold. It was a pleasure to read.
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100th HOODWINK !
Gaylene,
Your words are powerfully used in this short write expressing raw feelings. Vey well done, congrats on the Gold Trophy!
You have been chosen as a victim of our 100th Hoodwinking Celebration for The Poetic Bandits group. We want to let you know we love AllPoetry and all you have done to make it the wonderful Poetic Community that it is. Your efforts have been noted and you are appreciated. Thank you!
Dennis (Gray Elk)
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Excellent Write!
A single drop of love
fills the ocean of feelings
that abound in unlimited
chambers of a heart
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Thanks again for reading and your great comments and applause. I will have to mosey on by your page
Gaylene
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I can clearly see why this lovely piece won a Gold.
You have peened such an awesome piece of poetry.
Very beautifully done.
Justgot2loveme
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So much said with so little. Bravo, a well diserved trophy. It is a different take on the picture but a great one nonetheless. It really takes out the importance and devotion of each raindrop and can really make a person think when it rains lol
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Oh this is stunning your words so beautifully writte. I had to write a poem for this prompt in a diff contest I love what you came up with
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How wonderful beautiful...great work as always my friend...congrat's on the well deserved Gold.
Best to you!
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Excellent
Terrific take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
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