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Simple Simon

Simple Simon, He's on fire
His heart beats out of control
He's lost in your mystery
His ultimate demise
He feels your passion
He's lost in your beauty
He can't control his desire
He's only a man
What's he suppose to do?

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Well simple simon should speak up
    Make love to his little buttercup
    Time is wasted if we don't find love
    Beneath that big full moon above
    So take her hand and give a kiss
    It just might lead to wedded bliss



    I really enjoyed this one. Nice to see you back with your sense of humor!!! I hope all is well with you. You take care dear friend. Sandy


  • gullionmar
    March 9, 2008
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    good

    simple but true good job

  • June-bug
    March 9, 2008
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    Enjoyed

    Well now..Kind of got a chuckle out of this one. Yet I empathize with poor Simon..Maybe the answer is simple and Simon should just let her know..but maybe it isn't that simple! Oh matters of the heart can be so pleasurable yet tormenting. POOR SIMON!!!