giggle, try to sing along
versus being so chilly
and I won't appear weird warm
my daughter harmonized,
feelings must've compared like with a bird
since looked up at sky
Author notes
good luck doesn't mark comfort; Isaiah 65:11
comment with your inflection please
not unnatural emoticons NOR the applause at all
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 3 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended March 9, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
horses hear my voice a bit as I'm celebrating looking at you
Comments
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This is a wonderful piece, nicely penned with that personal touch
Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
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thank you for thinking it such a thing
Karen so nice
I appreciate your comment's acclaim for this which was indeed right out of experience that turned exciting.
I was happy your competition prompted the application, but good luck isn't a joke I want to join per se...
tonight's version is concentration silenced a noise,
babies are my subject
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