Eyes of pure gold stand out in the bitter rain.
A lust so keen fills my gut.
Shivers through my limbs.
A step toward me,
But no reason I can see to retreat.
A hand along my throat.
But no fear consumes me.
A wicked smile plays along your lips,
Revealing fangs so deadly.
But for reasons unknown, I remain calm.
Entranced.
Water running down my arms and face..
You lean in...
Light kisses upon heated flesh.
And I know.
The instant before you teeth sink in.
That I am yours..
Til Time fades to nothing.
My body goes weak,
As blood gently drips down my collar bone.
But a gasp of pleasure escapes my lips.
My life is yours
Oh Sensual one.
Take me and have me all to yourself.
A contest entry
- Raining Blood... by VoltaicHypnosis.
870 points, ended March 16, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any Comments welcome....
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
love the imagery in this, midnight
Eyes of pure gold stand out in the bitter rain.
A lust so keen fills my gut.
Shivers through my limbs.
A step toward me,
But no reason I can see to retreat.
The background suits this piece very well. I just submitted a vampire poem today. I hope that everything is going well for you since we last chatted.
-
wow amazing write. love the background. i'm a fan of vampires so this was right up my alley. ur name caught my eye cuz i'm part irish n its just a cool name. much talent shown here. a darkly seducing write. well done.
-
-
haunted doll
Thanks love..glad you enjoyed it. **winks** vampires are amazing!! LoL!! And I love your SN as well..*winks*
-
-
MMMMMMM...I love Vamp writes! This is sensual and so intense...wonderful! Best of luck!!!
Blessings~
Az
-
-
AZ
Thanks hun!! I love em too...they are so much fun to write...and it's a good getaway from reality
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
