Your dark cryptic kisses devour my soul,
Lost in passionate memories of things to be told.
When I had you this world was so different,
You made all I saw truly magnificent.
Long moonlit nights walking the city with you,
The murderous bloodshed we went through.
Together we conquered them all,
Drained worthless body's left to fall.
Inside is painted a sweet picture of love,
But out in the city tonight its raining blood.
Author notes
Writing about one of my favorite things, Vampires
A contest entry
- Raining Blood... by VoltaicHypnosis.
870 points, ended March 16, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Damn. I think there was five different visions I saw. Plus you did good on the rhyming!
Good luck!
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WOOOOT ohhh yess this is good, good work. Good luck.
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