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I Hate That You Laugh Because I Care

You seem to block out my every word
And this puts up an unbreakable wall
I've been trying to get in your soul
But now I'm only begun the fall
You've put my heart through enough
And now it won't give in
I've asked I've considered
I've pushed and pulled
And I now it seems this fight is impossible to win
And you've laughed and cried
At my foolish tries
Not seeing what I was trying to tell
And this pain only comes back
As a sad and final farewell


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  • wow thisis really good ilove this one mostley because myheart hasbeen through enough and now theirs nothing left my heart and soul are gone i gave them to so many people and they vandalized it with their name and i cant get it back because when ever i try they claim it has always been theirs so now im emptey theirs nothing left


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 13, 2008
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    wow!ill read more of ur poems tomorrow!! x


  • Nakatrea
    April 12, 2008
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    pretty poetry once again. your emotions are oh so vivid. yay clappyz


  • Leech
    March 24, 2008
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    I give you clappyness because its good


  • FillysEmbrace
    March 23, 2008
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    this is really good. when i read it i completely understand where u r goin with this. awesome job.


  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    March 9, 2008
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    I love it and i agree i feel the same as well chloe Great write.

    sincerely,
    Lonelywolf Tasagka

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