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Love I warned you

Love, can't you see?
I've been lying to you.
I'm sad because I see you in pain.
I'm sad because your heart is being broken right in front of me and I can't do anything.
My eyes are red, my vision is blurry because of the tears.
The whole world is distorted
Yet the only thing I can see is you.
I feel like I'm holding out my heart to you waiting for you to take it and use it for your own.
I can feel it bleeding in my hands...
pouring out crimson blood.
I look down,
I see two blood puddles.
I look back up at you and see you holding out your pitiful looking heart to some guy with a evil aura.
Love, can you see what you are doing?
I warn you,
you tell me you already know.
We keep telling each other 'I don't want to see you hurt.'
We keep taking these chances.
I only do it to help you.
But I only hurt you more.
I see you handing out pieces of your broken porcelain heart...
It's to late to go back now.
Those theifs just stole what's left of you.
Now every time I look at you, your lifeless and broken.
You keep asking me to kill you.
How can I kill you?
Your soul is already dead.
I watched you drown...
I couldn't do anything....
I'm sorry.
Just know love,
I will always care about you and you're not alone... I'll always be here,

I love you.

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Not all of it is true about maddie... but most of it. love u darlin'.

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  • lemonhead
    March 10, 2008
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    ... too true... Its sad... Great poem... !


  • Sle3p
    March 9, 2008

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    tell me jenny who is it...that u think the 'one witht the evil aura' is who i'm giving my heart to? i love you too jenny <3


    • VampyEyes
      March 10, 2008
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      arg I love u too much >_< I can't help you with every thing but I wish I could!!!!


    • VampyEyes
      March 10, 2008
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      idk yet... I was thinking about that myself, sorry but some way I see you getting hurt and it's making me sad!


  • Innocent Evil
    March 9, 2008
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    Niiice poem! Ilike how you said broken porcelain heart its good! <3 it!


  • playin with scissor
    March 9, 2008
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    beautiful poem

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