To stroke on page
in passionate trail,
to enlighten society
of mankind's folly;
triumph surges
with each step of success.
Author notes
20 words
PROMPT C
HAPPINESS LIES IN THE JOY OF ACHIEVEMENT
AND THE THRILL OF CREATIVE EFFORT
FRANKLIN D. ROOSEVELT
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/20/30 PIF QUICKIE by Three Doves.
975 points, ended March 10, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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again so beautiful! Every words says so much and the poem is so powerful yet soft at the same time! Definetly deep and thought provokign as well! Great write! <3
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ah successive steps saunter along humnity's humble achievements, and then slips - a good poem.
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accomplishment
congrats on the gold!!!
-Slick
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Twenty little words can say so much... for instance, that ones heart is in the right place. Thanks for the enlightening write. Congrats on the Gold!
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Yes Yes Yes
truly the purpose of the Heavenly Quill to bring forth the message of Heavenly beings to enlighten all humanity perhaps oneday all humanity will listen. Thank you for listening. Peace in light and love. Best wishes in life and the contest. Be well.
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