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You walk away

You walk away
From me this night
But when you’re gone
I have no light

You must not leave
I whisper low:
“You are my fire
You are my glow!

I know it’s hard
I know it’s tough
You are broken
And had enough

I would carry
The pain for you
I carry it
All the way through!”

Now you are gone
I have no hope
I vanish away
Living on dope

The darkness grows
Inside my head
Oh, how I wish
I just was dead

The pain in me
It grows so huge
I’m so depressed
I’m so confused

Suffocating
I lie asleep
It bleeds dark red
I cut so deep

Then when the pain
Is finally gone
I watch my wrist
See what I’ve done

I guess I’m just
Trying to say
I do love you
And need you to stay

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