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Selfish, egomaniac and obsessed
those are the three I like the best

I can't admit I'm wrong and neither can you

maybe that's what I like most about you

Shout in the room,yell at the screen

is this really how a relationship should be?

Sure, I ask too much, I cry a lot too

but have you ever thought that you give too few? 

 

Selfish, egomaniac and obsessed

those were the three that hurt the most 

I'll admit that I'm wrong if you say you're not right

did we really have to ruin it tonight?

I'll give you my all and won't ask for a bit

don't mind all the moments I slit

I love you 

And when you love someone, you love him

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    Oh yes, why do people who supposedly love each other fight all the time; over silly things that make no difference whatsoever? Are they all selfish, egotistical and obsessed? INteresting poem, I am sure many can relate to this. Sentiments well expressed in these lines.

    • Latradi
      March 16, 2008
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      I know.. it's so silly in the end... and the worst part is that the things you hate the most about someone are probably the things that you love.. makes no sense I know!
      Well thank you for commenting, take care,
      Latradi