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Everlastingly,
Forgotten without your love,
Will forever kill.

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  • sighingflosser.
    October 26
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    this is amazing. seriously, severely amazing.


  • withering.whisper
    September 21

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    aw, this is a very powerful haiku. i love the first word, it's just a fun word to say, and then the emotion of being forgotten with love..that is so painful, and the ending with "will" and "kill" it just sounds really cool =)


  • new light
    February 19
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    this is beautiful


  • aanika
    June 26, 2008

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    lol :|
    unless im severely confused,
    this sentence doesnt make sense
    cause it doesnt have a subject :|
    other than that, i like it, the words are all very strong


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 9, 2008
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    wow....nice ^^ good luck

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