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Stagnant Attars

 

 

 

 

 

the shadowed edges

of rubbied gloom
lie studded with secrets
[inlaid with lies]
that leak breath stained words.

the plucked placentas
of polished petals
that drip untruths.
[the broken bodies of roses,
our testaments to love.]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Topnotchsy
    June 26, 2008

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    Nice write. Congrats on the gold trophy, it was well deserved. Especially liked the line "[inlaid with lies]"


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 9, 2008

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    Very beautiful indeed and love the colour of background. The first two lines were amazing, they captivated me perfectly. Nicely written.


  • Unsigned gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    Loverly write

    Good luck

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