strands of spanish moss
wave in the soft summer breeze
wind chimes sans a sound
Author notes
Written December 1st, 2003
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A contest entry
- Haiku by Asfand.
450 points, ended August 5, 2007, 14 entries
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Nice picture
good vision of serene area of nature, the sounds of silence,good job,thanks for entering our contest..MM
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Your poem is beautifully carved. The wordings flutter around and reverberate in the mind. Very nice and impressive!
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Nice title (and I'm not bothered if haiku have titles): evocative, suggestive, but doesn't give away the whole poem.
But punctuation after line 2 would probably help since lines 1 and 2 are clearly connected by sentence structure, and line 3 represents a shift to a new image.
Good image, strong tone, and nice sound patterning.
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This is really nice and calming. The sound, the sight, even the feel come across wonderfully. Very nice. Thanks for the comment.
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Aww, that's pretty. kinda gave me goose bumps. Good comparison, I like that, moss - wind chimes nice work
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like the aliteration in this one, lovely haiku, it is very calming and tranquil, thankyou.
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Excellent
"Silent wind chimes..." I can hear them now. This is really excellent. -
ooo. Very nice haiku. I like the image it creates, you did a wonderfull job.
-Kami=)
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