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lakeside cabin

lakeside cabin—
we hold each other under
the weeping willow

A contest entry

is this evocative and open-ended?

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  • dillpickle62
    March 27, 2008
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    wow

    you have a great gift. Really scenic in such few words.
    Keep penning friend your really good!


  • background music
    March 25, 2008

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    How romantic! I could picture this scene clearly in my mind. Well deseriving of silver! WEll done!


  • Ithica silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    !

    WOOO-HOOO!!!!! You've bagged the Silver Cup for this intimate little "ku" Congrats. on that podium position!


    • ukelova
      March 22, 2008
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      Silver Cup

      Yay! Thank you very much for your congratulations! I'm stoked! It's a lovely easter present.


  • Swan song gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    A little romance in a nature setting very good picture here well done


    • ukelova
      March 22, 2008
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      nature setting

      Wow! Thanks you very much for the applause.

      And also, thank you very much for the award. I'm very chuffed! Yay!


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    very nice...a lovely moment..

    • ukelova
      March 20, 2008
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      moment

      Thanks heaps for visiting this haiku! Much appreciated...


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    Each line holds special meaning to me, for personal reasons. And isn't that what good poetry is supposed to evoke in the reader? Good luck in the contest, Poet. Wanda


  • ukelova
    March 16, 2008
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    weeping

    Hi Sandal - glad you picked up the connotation in the last line. I appreciate your critique.


  • Timespell
    March 12, 2008

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    Very Good,

    Not done many Haiku poems myself, but can see how you have expressed a quaint view.

    Good luck in the contest.

    All the best,

    ~T.S~


  • mtpoet
    March 11, 2008
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    Yes...


  • Sandal
    March 10, 2008

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    "Weeping willow" has its own connotations, leaving the reader to find meaning independently. This is very pretty, and clearly summertime. Best of luck!


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    March 10, 2008

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    Wow a great little haiku
    Captire & says it all

    Well done hope you do well with the contest you have it in



    Cindy


  • Venugopal gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Reality into a haiku. We enjoy lake side cabin but why not under a smiling willow. Good haiku


  • Samplette gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Sounds like a romantic getaway to me, and the perfect haiku. Very nicely done. I wish you the best in the contest.
    Sam


    • ukelova
      March 9, 2008
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      Romantic

      Thanks for your good wishes and for your comments on my haiku. That's nice of you.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 9, 2008

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    This is beautiful...I love the image of holding each other under the weeping willow. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli

    • ukelova
      March 9, 2008
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      Beautiful

      Thanks for your beautiful comments; I appreciate them.

  • jodygirl
    March 9, 2008

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    Very nice. Thoughts of vacation quickly enter my mind. Can't wait for mine. I like this. Good luck in the contest.
    Joan

    • ukelova
      March 9, 2008
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      vacation

      Thanks for reading this one Joan and for your good wishes.

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