Come on over inside my sacred temple honey,
Because what I have for you is worth more than any amount of money.
Come on over and you will see, just how fun this erotic adventure will be.
Just say the word and I'll do whatever you please,
As long as you end up bringing me weak to my knees.
I'll lay on my stomach, ass all in the air,
As your riding me deeper gripping my hair without giving it it's gently care.
You can do anything you want with me, as long you let me go into an eruptive glee.
Come on over baby and make me cum,
Tasting my delicious juices like a glass full of rum.
Come on over because all I want is you,
Boy do you not see the wonderful damages that you do?
Tell me how sexy I feel as you pound me as we go into round eleven,
You making love to every part of my body is like a taste heaven.
So tell me how badly you want this,
Because I'm sure as hell I can put you into bliss and that's something you surely don't want to miss.
Come on over and I'll be your little dark angel,
Because I know you want to get a nice handle on this treasure I kept just for you.
So come on over and tell me want you want me to do,
Because baby I would do anything for you.
All you have to do is just come on over and tell me.
Author notes
I hope this poem gets me into the next round.
Erotic by Secret Account was good for inspiration.
A contest entry
- Erotic Challenge....Round 1 Picture Inspired...Come & get ur spot...Move onto the next round...Win big points along the journey of 3 Rounds....... by CinfullyDelicious.
750 points, ended March 14, 15 entries
Honorable winner
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck, Josie
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Nice write. Best of luck.
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ooo this was good. thanks for entering good luck
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Nice invitation!!! Great write.
Blessings~
Az
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You're so very generous..honey...
You enjoy it and you like to provide enjoyment...
And you do it so skillfully...
so lustfully...
with involvement of your whole body and soul...
You're great, my love!...
A beautiful erotica!
I was carried away, sweetie!...
it seemed to me as if I tasted your sweet body...lol...(joking)...
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Come on over...I love that
Thats like okay...I'm coming on over...cause your descriptions were hot, juicy and built so well
The rhyming down well too
I struggled a little to read it aloud..so maybe a few re-reads yourself and a little tidy before judging...but otherwise don't change tooooo much cause WoWeeeeeeeeeee
Thank you and Good luck
Cindy
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Great poem, the yearning pulls the readers full attention.
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