Wondering, I trudge slowly,
contemplating your mysteries
with no end in view.
Amorphous curves continue
Guiding my wanderings until a sharp
Left turn moves down a straight path.
Ecstatic, I use my reason to reach
The End, only to find there is a
Divide whereby I cannot answer
The Question.
A contest entry
- One More Time Around The Merry-Go-Round by Dalaney.
800 points, ended March 16, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is great! So few words but no more than needed to paint a perplexing picture. The imagery here is very vivid and the tone left me feeling cold but not unpleasantly so. Enigma would be a good title is you are looking for one but if not ? says basically the same thing now that i think of it...nm Leah
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I like you thoughts spoken here. Great wording and images. I think we all find roadblocks sometimes when we go to answer a question.
Very well done.
good luck in your contest.
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