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New Baby Soul

Two people in love

  Joined together

By God and made one.

 

Time passes as love grows.

  Two hearts await

For the birth of a new soul.

 

When time is right

  To receive

The birth of one,

 

Remember dear parents

  You had helped

For only God grants

 

A New Baby's Soul

 

12-10-2004

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  • mcheadle
    March 27, 2008
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    well kids this is where babies come from

    In my day and time , you went to the garden in the cabbage patch ,with the lettus even in the turnip patch. Now the truth is our . Babies are made of love . Love they find in their parents that can't love them enough. My maw always said I loves ya enough to eat you all up like you were desert...mac

  • yourguardianangel
    March 21, 2008

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    This is very sweet and innocent. So peaceful compared to what I usually read and write...nice job on this