...and I stretched out my hand,
it was in order to catch her
but then, I have a funny feeling
which gives way to wonder,
did I miss her? did she slip?
I guess it just nothing, but in fact,
now this is not in my way,
which is the way in which I prefer,
I hope, but I refuse to pray
will she finally get it? right on the tip?..
..of the mountain top which she climbs
to find the answer to the riddle placed,
and I shake my head because she got confused
with the words my riddle's so neatly laced.
hmmm....will she quit?
She's tired now frustrated
but I, will not go to aid.
She laughed, she scoffed but now she knows
my debt, of not my fault, but still it was paid.
Shit...
She slipped, or rather she fell
into an abyss of hell, but I caught her,
and I hinted, and gave her a clue,
and then I pushed her.
See, I knew she wouldn't quit,
not really.
Author notes
This is entirely metaphorical, to do with someone, who I know and am trying to get to understand something, but I refuse to explain. Not...and I stretched out my hand, ] properly at least.
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hmmmm, its interesting. y do i get the feeling i no who this is about? major sense of deja vu here. i disagree with the other comment, i think it is creative. c x
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I really don't like the way this was written, structurally and whatnot. I think it could've been a lot more creative. Thank you for entering, but this is not right for my contest.
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