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Green Tea



The garden dimly lit with the coital candles

A maiden comes to sit in her golden sandals

Caress of silken pillows a sweet herbal scent

Opaque drapery billows with sensual intent

Virginal averted eyes shyly inviting the guest

As a winged heart flies the vulva is undressed

Gently holding the cups of pale rounded flesh

Then taking small sips as the fingers enmesh

Warm melting sighs and clenching of the hips

Embrace of the thighs as sweet nectar drips

Tapping at the door of the soft libidinous lip

Opening a little more and entering just the tip

Tasting like the seas brimming cups of Zen

A blending of the teas where new lives begin





Author notes

This poem was first written with short lines rhyming abab after I combined them into the longer lines rhyming aabb, it left an inner rhyme in the middle, resulting in double rhyme.
The image source:http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd139/nikimarie7/pinkoriental.jpg

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  • individuality gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    ah rhyme schemes i had someone the other day say something to me about how a poem changed with the scheme, but they failed to see it was intentional. a good poem, very soft and gentle with the ripples of movement.


  • Godless But Divine gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Sailing









    Heart started to quiver, from fever steaming the river
    Creation of an erotical view, ferment bodies till brew
    As I behold grapes on vines, from vagina I drank wine
    Then the flesh tasted tea, changed as sailing change the sea.

    Mesmerising work, adorable view...Excellently penned..Best luck.


  • Galaxy2
    March 9, 2008

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    You know the art of presenting erotic activities in a sensible and yet alluring way....

    Kisses for my sweet lady!

    Galaxy2