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Piano

I heard the way
Notes fitted
Without the harsh clunk
Of unintended dissonance
Fingers moving flawlessly
Across ivory keys

I heard passion
Through interlacing harmony
The melody floating
Rising and falling
Almost like the player
Creates life through song

And I can only listen on in awe
To a melody that brings tears to my eyes
Something so pure
So vibrant
Echoing on the inner workings of the Piano

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    As a professional piano / keyboard musician, I can relate to this well written composition completely.
    My music, as well as my writing, means the world to me and is a great outlet to release the inner pressures of life in an artistic way.
    I enjoyed this read!
    Well Done!